Cartwright Inclusive Language Guidance - Revision history

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Situation: Including Pronouns: Adding link to prevent dead-ending

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	''The Royal Council has also approved a motion allowing members to use pronouns in signatures (both in email and in the forums), this isn’t mandatory, but is permitted in addition to the other signature elements outlined in AO 1703-06.''		''The Royal Council has also approved a motion allowing members to use pronouns in signatures (both in email and in the forums), this isn’t mandatory, but is permitted in addition to the other signature elements outlined in [[Admiralty Order 1703-06\|AO 1703-06]].''

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	=Introduction to the Cartwright Inclusive Language Guidance=		=Introduction to the Cartwright Inclusive Language Guidance=
	This guidance was written as part of a joint project between TRMN's House of Lords and House of Commons. It went through a series of revisions until the version you see today was voted upon by both houses and accepted by the Royal Council.		This guidance was written as part of a joint project between TRMN's House of Lords and House of Commons. It went through a series of revisions until the version you see today was voted upon by both houses and accepted by the Royal Council.

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	=Introduction to the Cartwright Inclusive Language Guidance=		=Introduction to the Cartwright Inclusive Language Guidance=
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 I give you Grayson, the Keys, the Sword and The Tester
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 Greetings to all the crew of HMS Pegasus!

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=Introduction to the Cartwright Inclusive Language Guidance=
This guidance was written as part of a joint project between TRMN's House of Lords and House of Commons. It went through a series of revisions until the version you see today was voted upon by both houses and accepted by the Royal Council.

The guidance is designed to assist those who want to be more inclusive of their use of language within TRMN. It isn’t expected to be something that becomes a series of rules or regulations, but more something to assist those who want to do better.

The guidance has been set up as a series of situations that you might encounter, with suggestions for inclusive language following it. Often there are a couple of suggestions where there is not one standard, and sometimes explanatory notes are included as well.

This guidance may evolve as time goes on so if you have suggestions please contact your local MP or a Peer.

==Situation: Alliance Toasts (no Peers Present)==
'''Suggested Language:'''

Citizens of the Grand Alliance

Or

Esteemed Guests

''(Manticoran Toast)''

I give you the Queen

Response: The Queen

''(Grayson Toast)''

I give you Grayson, the Keys, the Sword and The Tester

Resp: Grayson, the Keys, the Sword and The Tester

==Situation: Alliance Toasts (Peers Present)==
'''Suggested Language:'''

Peers and Citizens of the Grand Alliance

''Or''

Distinguished Guests

''(Manticoran Toast)''

I give you the Queen

Response: The Queen

''(Grayson Toast)''

I give you Grayson, the Keys, the Sword and The Tester

Response: Grayson, the Keys, the Sword and The Tester

==Situation: Honorifics for Knights==
'''Suggested Language:'''

Sir Snuffy ''(for those who identify as male)''

Dame Snuffy ''(for those who identify as female)''

Knight Snuffy ''(for those who identify as neither male nor female)''

(Based on https://forums.trmn.org/viewtopic.php?p=28917#p28917)

==Situation: Addressing your crew (e.g. a social media or forum post)==
'''Suggested Language:'''

Hello Everyone

Or

Greetings to all the crew of HMS Pegasus!